Hey! Tell me what you think of my poem please :]?

I think you can hear a lot of what hollywood puts off in it. The whole "Marlyn Monroe was a size 12 and today stars are a size 0". I hope these are not things you think of yourself!!! Just a point you are trying to convey! If it is the latter I think you definetly hit the mark and I agree with the others that you have talent. Keep it up!