What do you think of my poem?

Wow, I have to say your poem is very good and very emotionally powerful. The way you describe the disturbed and twisted persona of this girl hating what she sees in her mirror. This poem is very psychologically emotive as it expresses the deep feelings coming from her very core. You should be very proud of your poem as you have written the poem in the point of view of the character, rather than writing it as if someone else is telling the story of the character. In this poem you express some of the issues that many do not tend to tackle i.e. many like to write about things that are positive, whereas you have written about the harsh truth that many young girls wish they could change themselves.