If you would read my new poem?

Mmm, someone seems to have caught the love bug badly here, yet there is no reciprocation from the young lady. Its meaning is quite clear but I agonized over your rhyming and line length. "Ignore my ramblings". Yes you do somewhat ramble in this one. I think that you are pretty desperate to impress this rare find but go somewhat overboard. It is a brave attempt which really does not come off and does need to be re written. But well done for trying.